All Comments on 'Kira Ch. 01: A Mysterious Visitor'

by Ternish

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JackSprat88JackSprat88over 8 years ago
a wonderfully written start...

to a very arousing story.

Here's hoping it continues soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Even college freshman aren't THIS stupid.

Bad premise, badly told. no stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Actually They Are

College freshman and the rest are incredibly stupid. Ask any security officer at any college. In the evening hours their job mostly consists of chaperoning coeds from one part of campus to another!

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