All Comments on 'Kiravi's Travelogue Ch. 06'

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abiostudent3 about 3 years ago

I could happily read a novel made of this in a day or two. Please don't ever think that you need to reduce the plot for the sake of the erotic - this is excellent writing and a wonderful story. (Even if this ritual is... Discomforting.)

pk2curious about 3 years ago

The building of anticipation is commendable . Timely and compelling . I love your style .

Lwcby about 2 years ago

Another twist having to scim hoping this shit show doesn’t get any more fucked up or depraved. Pretty much went to SHIT the last chapter! Sad, it was pretty cool!

Looselyhuman almost 2 years ago

RIP

xhristianj over 1 year ago

If I never hear the words and dear readers one more time seriously it's so annoying or I was young? I mean how more pathetic can you make this fucking waste of space?

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Husband and wife team that enjoys sci-fi/fantasy roleplay and world-building! 03AUG22: For any and all that have been waiting for Kiravi updates or for New Imperium and Over the Hill White Knight to take on lives of their own, thank you for your patience and interest! Unfortu...

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