All Comments on 'Kismet or Happenstance? Ch. 06'

You got me good! I didn't see that other twist coming but when I read the other chapters again it made sense. The clues were there. I love how Ana and Sean are becoming friends now that they're already lovers. You can see how she's growing and he's falling in love. Their relationship feels so real but still there's romance and fantasy woven in. I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.

Your characters have minds of their own too? LOL, tell me about it. But isn't it fun? Fabulous to see another chapter from you. It's way after midnight here, but it's too hot to sleep--and you've just kept me wonderfully entertained for the last half an hour or so. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes!

How cruel to stop right there :) You are a very talented writer. I'm not sure I've ever read something on lit that is this well put together plot wise. Excited to see what will come next.

Wow, I have really fallen in love with your story. I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to see how this turns out!

How is that possible? Lol. PacificCoastRiff and CuriousBloom are about to butt heads, and this is definitely Kismet! Happenstance, perhaps...but Kismet is my verdict!

wonderful and well textured, as per your usual.

He's pacificoastriff...didn't expect that twist, holy shit...

Shit's about to hit the fan!