All Comments on 'Kiss My Apocalips Ch. 01'

I am always pleased to see something posted by you. Please continue writing :)

Fantastic. Can't wait for more, and to see if I am right. To paraphrase Giorgio, I don't want to say it was aliens, but it was aliens.

I love apocalyptic tales, and this is wonderful. Good writing and HOT! Drew me right in. Please continue the story! 5 Stars!!

I read some of your other stories and this one is much better writing. While the others are professional, they are a bit formulaic in their delivery (the Case Files in particular). This one, so far, is a fresh approach to the Apocalyptic genre.

On a whim, I thought I would check if blacknight99 had written anything lately, and I came upon this gem. Good timing. Looking forward to upcoming chapters.

Love it so far. Looking forward to what's next!

Spectacular start!

Geographic note - Eastern Oregon starts at the crest of the cascades - the eastern slope of the Coast Range would just be called the western edge of the Willamette Valley, or as you did, the eastern foothills of the Coast Range.

Meanwhile Acton's a perfect name and I love the idea of hiding out at a Rhododendron farm!

I'm hooked ...

They're not clips, they're magazines.

Other than that, this was a great start!

Awe what a sweet start to whats going to be a fucked up world . GR8 chapter .

Don't you just love these knowitalls that think they know your fictional otherworld ?

They never learn that their facts went out the window when they clicked on Literotica .

Lol just think what they would say if at 7:47 you said that Mount Everest just popped up in Oregon . Lol .

..Very good start to what looks to become a very good story.

Great closing line.

First of all any story about the end of the world that starts by praising Lucifer’s Hammer gets 5 stars for the sheer brilliance of that comment. It is still hands down my favorite end of the world novel. Then on top of that this first part makes me want to keep reading for sure. This is my second one of your stories on here that I have read and I am seeing a trend of good fun fiction in your stories.

I stumbled across the latest chapter uploaded so,thought I would have a look. Obviously started at the first chapter. Fantastic. I’m in. And hooked. And starting chapter 2 right……NOW

The dialogue is kinda weird