All Comments on 'Kiss My Apocalips Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Excellent Story, you have a great imagination! Please continue, this is a fantastic tale!!

ProgamermoveProgamermove5 months ago

Damn, shit got crazy very quickly!

qxvw198qxvw1985 months ago

I'm very curious to see how Wanda and Doriana behave with the drug in their systems.

YassreadYassread5 months ago

Wow, that escalated quickly.

bear1999bear19995 months ago

okay didn't see all of this coming from gentle giant to stone cold killer and soon to be harem master..nicely done

SraulersSraulers5 months ago

Letting Wanda be raped again (like by her brother) is not Sci-Fi, it’s rape/non-consensual. Ruined your story arc already… 1*

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFake5 months ago

Man, I wish Wanda hadn't been raped. I was hoping the other woman somehow didn't inject and Wanda faked it and she'd escape. That's a lot of trauma for her in her life already. You certainly foreshadowed the danger of them falling asleep without making it safe. Of course, they are just kids, 18, 19, the whole world changed.

pk2curiouspk2curious5 months ago

Sraulers below is another that thinks he can write a story . Tell me Srasulers what doesn't happen in an Apocalips ?

MocmoMocmo3 months ago

This chapter is most definitely in the wrong category.

DragonSlayerJohn1DragonSlayerJohn13 months ago

Why didn’t they drug the big guy and use him as their muscle?

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