by blacknight99
Excellent Story, you have a great imagination! Please continue, this is a fantastic tale!!
I'm very curious to see how Wanda and Doriana behave with the drug in their systems.
okay didn't see all of this coming from gentle giant to stone cold killer and soon to be harem master..nicely done
Letting Wanda be raped again (like by her brother) is not Sci-Fi, it’s rape/non-consensual. Ruined your story arc already… 1*
Man, I wish Wanda hadn't been raped. I was hoping the other woman somehow didn't inject and Wanda faked it and she'd escape. That's a lot of trauma for her in her life already. You certainly foreshadowed the danger of them falling asleep without making it safe. Of course, they are just kids, 18, 19, the whole world changed.
Sraulers below is another that thinks he can write a story . Tell me Srasulers what doesn't happen in an Apocalips ?