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It is also our theory that, deep in the Amazon, or high in the remote peaks of the Andes, more old wise ones may still live, and we plan to research this possibility soon. Our hope is that these aged healers may know of others who received the kiss, or could at least furnish additional information about the species we have joined.
Our belief is that we are not alone. Surely, over the centuries the Aztecs existed in Mexico, and the subsequent years of their residence in areas further South, the gift was given to many. Our dream is of a colony of those such as ourselves, so that we may study our species as humans study themselves. There is so much to learn. We have not yet been able to produce young, but it is possible that other have been more fortunate. Perhaps, if properly administered, the fluid in our fangs can create others of our like from humans, and the species can reproduce in this manner. We have heard of those purported to be human who exhibit some of our characteristics, though all attempts at contact have been fruitless. Our search shall continue. There is no need for haste. After all, we have eternity through which to search, and if there are others of our species, they too will live through the ages with us. Should we be the lone members of our kind, we still have each other, and we have the intense pleasure conveyed by the kiss of the viper.
- COMMENTS
Peapod413 months agoThis. yarn didn't grab me so much. Well told but I guess the willing suspension of disbelief
wasn't willing. Still, most competently constructed. I guess it's a matter of taste. There's nothing wrong with yours, so it must be mine.
oldpantythiefover 1 year agoYou certainly have a way with words. Interesting story that had a twist at the end. Thanks
Anonymousover 16 years agoThis was unbelievable. I rarely come across a story that completely captivates me. This story is one of those rare ones.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI'll keep it simple: damn fine character development that is often lacking in this genre. An impressive piece, and I look forward to more work from you in the future.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoVery nice charater building. I would love to read more stories about these charaters.
badger_ravenmoonover 19 years agoI loved your story. It was not some kind of "one-hander" like so many others, but had a slow and building quality. Your character development was superb.
