All Comments on 'Kissing Cousins Ch. 10'

While somewhat brief, the tenth chapter in this engaging story has a blockbuster ending, which leaves the reader "hanging", wondering what will happen next. Another excellent submission by an outstanding author in this ongoing romantic drama. Five stars

It moves too fast. Well it does in a X-factor story, especially when used in tandem with the unthinkable prospect of illicit discovery to square dramatic tension.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****