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Click hereKellyn washed the lingerie and draped it over the towel rack to dry. She adjusted the water and stepped into the shower. The fragrance of her honeysuckle shower gel filled the small room. Kellyn pulled back the shower curtain and steam billowed into the bathroom. She turned and saw a heart appear, traced as if by an invisible finger, in the steam-clouded mirror.
The End.
A kiss from the good little witch.
There's a curious "sideways look" in your writing.
I love it.
HP
That was wonderful. I love how the ghost was like, no names necessary sweetheart, all that matters is the way I'm going to make you feel tonight. Very enjoyable.
One of the more original ones I've seen, and the ending was great.
A very good use of long foreplay, the flow of a quiet woman, one that seemed to be doubting her mystical thoughts, yet reluctantly giving into them, with lust.
Purrfectly written, "Good Little Witch".
Loved it nice tht the ghost came home wit her. Would have also been nice if he could have stayed and went to the shower with her. The heart in the mirror nice touch would like to read more about these two...
Great romantic story, with a nice little twist with the 'special' lingerie. The heart scene at the end was perfect. Leaves me wanting to know more about Kellyn and her ghostly lover. That's always good.
Thank you, and good luck in the contest!
Sweet - and the nightgown part had me grinning. Hope she goes back for the garter belt and matching stockings :-)
I liked it. I didn't think I would but it made me smile. Best of luck to you.
DG