by Jay_Lloyd
I especially loved that after he licked her ass she walked away from him. And the casual description of her big clit was a great set up for her being in command. I wish he would suck it, too ... that she would fuck his mouth with it .. with him feeling it slide between his tight wet lips. And your ending was the perfect way to prepare us for what is sure to cum. Very well done!
Next should be based on the couple using him as boytoy.
Being sandwiched. Pissing and sspanking.
Chapter 2 is online now I will read it in a moment 4 stars good job.