All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 11'

I have just finished this story up to this point. I am begging you don't leave us hanging. This is a GREAT story.

just like so many authors in the past Bo starts a great story and then just leaves it unfinished. people he's not finishing the story. for god sakes he hasn't updated since 2010. lets just move on.

Hey Bowoodstock! I just wanted to say this series has been fantastic. Even if it's never finished then I'll still enjoy reading about Kita and Eric and imagining all the interesting things they would have gotten up to. Of course I'd love more but the annoyances of living can often get in the way of fantasising all too easily. I understand this far too well.

Still, I just wanted to say this story kicks some major ass. Well done!

Fantastic story you have going here! I loved the whole duel going on in this chapter and some more backstory on Kita. I'm eager to see more of her interactions with Eric too. Take as much time as you need for this story, I can wait because it's amazing.

Hey Bowoodstock,

I just wanted to thank you for the great story and to wish you the best of luck in your studies. I added you to my favorite authors to make sure I don't miss anything if you ever get a chance to continue writing. Don't let the complainers get you down, they wouldn't complain if they didn't love your work!

I hey the feeling that he was stealing the story from someone else and they found him out.

Not gonna lie, I only glanced over Ch11, but 1-10 were great. I very much look forward to seeing this one continue.

To the previous reply, what story would he have been copying?

Chapter 12 has been submitted, and pending literotica.com approval should be up in the next few days. Thank you all for waiting so patiently, and I appreciate the feedback as always. This thing ain't over yet

That's welcome news! As I recall, there were big things about to happen. I hope the Literotica pantheon speeds it along!

I am looking forward to the next chapter. I have been missing this story quite a bit.

please more iNEED to know how this end

I love all the meaning behind the names and hair style and such and am glad that you're leaving most of it for us to figure out on our own.

Man, you are seriously the best author I've read on this site. You should think about writing for a living. Very nice.

This is genius storytelling, thank you for sharing and please consider writing for printed publication!

Mate this is a helluva a flash back. But do tell did you actually have this already do led out when you wrote the one of her Tovurn in the forest?and again very very good

At first I was like "Flashback nooo!!" But you nailed it and I couldn't stop reading.

That was beautiful

Intrigue, twists and action.

Just that.

Write moar!!

Wow. Just... Wow.

It's like you've shifted into high gear suddenly, amazing story, thanks!

J

OUTSTANDING!!!!!

Good story, and worthy of a better and bigger audience— smooth the edges and publish it on Kindle!

[When copy editing it, please note that “likely hood” is spelled likelihood, and “after wards” is one word!]

oh fuck... I got goosebumps...

Gripping story, voted five.