by maxdname
i love your story. pls keep on writing. you're a very good writer.
this story was so sweet i adore your writing style,i most of all loved kip. you wouldnt happen to be like him ;)lollll
jess-a-bess@hotmail.com, would love to become friends.
I've never left comments on this site before because honestly who would but... That was one of the best, sweet, short stories I have read in a while. I loved your rapist and while I did not like the girl as much, I did like her reactions to the situation. A great story that I want to read in the future. I hope you have written more.
I like the rape/seduction stories best, and this one ends on such a tender note, love it!!!!
It started as a kidnapping and turned into love, I was moved by the surge of feelings that came from both of them.
Surprised when she wanted him to cum inside her with thoughts of getting pregnant on purpose.
All in all the story had a happy ending, I know not all stories do, but I was happy this one did. Thanks