All Comments on 'Kitty's Problem Ch. 01'

Should of been longer. Maybe to two pages or so.

SO???

Anyone notice that the author is 18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a late teenager? For such a young guy this is a very promising start. Kitty's totally enthralled by her big strong brother Phoenix and what he's got jumping around in his pants. There's no doubt that the boy's equally taken by his cute baby sister and the adorable little coochie she's hiding between her slender legs. I bet the talented Mr. T was hard when he wrote this story and by the end of the series he'll shoot a good healthy load of his own. I can't wait for Kitty's Problem Ch. 02, when her "problem" gets solved by what her big brother Phoenix's got swinging between his own legs.

Hurry!

You have posted a fair start, but you stopped too soon. I trust this is not the end of your story.

to short nothing happened

Garbage