by destodes777
VERY well-written and thought out, up to this point! Don't leave me hanging! I feel that there are at least four more chapters to be written. Nice job, to this point. Now, keep going!
Please get an editor; would help you and the story as well as the readers, greatly.
Thank you for the story. Some time has passed since the posting of this chapter I was hoping for more, but alas that has not happened. If you are able, then please continue the spinning of your tale.
more please absolutely need more of this story...ok so i will beg please please please more!!