All Comments on 'Knightshade Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
YES!

Please write the next chapter as fast as you can!

CreepyDragonCreepyDragonover 3 years ago
Nicely done!

I felt like I was right there with her the whole way. The fear, the anxiety, the uncertainty of her situation. I can't wait to see what she learns as she figures out the language barrier, or how fantastical your setting turns out to be.

zingfishzingfishover 3 years ago
Amazing imagery!

I can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent start!

Keep going it has the makings of a great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hottt, anticipating the next chapter!

(↓comment posted by accident)

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

And chance for a part 2? :-)

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