All Comments on 'Knobs and Knockers'

Just a suggestion, but the postscript ads nothing to the story. Lose it!

The written word is a medium that stirs our imagination to the point where we are there looking on while you, the author, are carrying out the activities you are describing. To us, in that state, it is real -- or real enough to stimulate our bodies to a physical reaction to the picture you are painting for us.

It is hard enough for us to come to the end of such a well-written story, let alone for us to then be told that the reality we have just experienced never really happened.

It's like a wet dream we can no longer remember. Such a let down.

Many thanks for your comment, I totally agree with you and had begun to suspect that it was a mistake to include it in my story: your words confirm it and my decision to remove it. Again, many thanks

Hot, nice build-up, and good description.

I'd have liked a bit more description once he was inside her, though. I felt like that was over very quickly, compared to the rest.

Very hot description of slipping inside, just need a bit more description of the sensations on your shaft or helmet!