All Comments on 'Knotty Neighbor'

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Trader_X38Trader_X38about 12 years ago
Well done!

Well written, great fantasy story, but not *too* far-fetched. Really like having two endings, cool trick.

JS_PhotoJS_Photoalmost 5 years ago
Your best story

As with the others, it could be longer, or more chapters added for subsequent scenes between the two neighbors, but I loved the plot. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
BOB FINDS HE NEEDED ANOTHER SUIT......

For the trip and stopped by the house on the way to the airport to pick it up and leave a note for his wife. Imagine his Surprise when he walks in on what looks like a rape. He kills Bruce immediately and divorces the skank whore after he's acquitted of murder due to his first impression of what was going on.

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