by knotcrafter
Well written, great fantasy story, but not *too* far-fetched. Really like having two endings, cool trick.
As with the others, it could be longer, or more chapters added for subsequent scenes between the two neighbors, but I loved the plot. Please keep writing.
For the trip and stopped by the house on the way to the airport to pick it up and leave a note for his wife. Imagine his Surprise when he walks in on what looks like a rape. He kills Bruce immediately and divorces the skank whore after he's acquitted of murder due to his first impression of what was going on.