All Comments on 'Knuckles - Not a Game for Wimps'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

I liked this one, I think the whole section where the dister talks about her past exploits could be drastically cut or foreshortened or eliminated, but the rest was good. Borders nc territory but I liked the set up.

GeneralUrsusGeneralUrsus12 months ago

Wow! That was very hot! I like your style and the build up. The build up could be a little shorter but very well written! Bravo!

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Scientist and avid reader. I like to write dark stories with a strong plot. I also like legs and athletic asses. I like breasts of all sizes and shapes, so I use terms like ample and generous to describe my female characters. I leave it to my readers to use their imaginations....