by bleeep
Wow is right. I didn’t expect the twist and it hit me hard. Excellent. 5 stars.
That was so intense and heartbreaking. I loved the ending. Very well written. 5🌟.
Very short, very powerful story. I first thought the protagonist was already dead and living through his personal hell. Thank you so much for sharing this story!
Same thought as the last comment, till the end i was guessing it was his hell. Really well written, short but powerful. Thank you! Easy 5 stars.