All Comments on 'Kobayasi Maru'

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teslaownerteslaowner4 months ago

Nice twist at the end

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun4 months ago

Well done! Very clever twist at the end.

HarleyRider1955HarleyRider19554 months ago

Wow is right. I didn’t expect the twist and it hit me hard. Excellent. 5 stars.

technofrog2002technofrog20024 months ago

That was so intense and heartbreaking. I loved the ending. Very well written. 5🌟.

KTD2020KTD20204 months ago

Very short, very powerful story. I first thought the protagonist was already dead and living through his personal hell. Thank you so much for sharing this story!

Ravey19Ravey194 months ago

Ye gods, what a twist. Brilliant.

inka2222inka22224 months ago

Same thought as the last comment, till the end i was guessing it was his hell. Really well written, short but powerful. Thank you! Easy 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Hated it, read it 3 times and gave it a well deserved 5!

Bronco56Bronco564 months ago

That's all I have is WOW.

5stars

Ranger001Ranger0013 months ago

A kindred spirit, I see. I was back in the ICU ...? 5🌟

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

In a bad situation with your loved ones you can’t have to live to win.

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Been suffering a bit of writer's block lately. I think I've overcome that, at least for the moment as I just submitted my third work in a little over a week. "Molly" was a story I'd been working on for over two years and the newest one "Irresistible Force" nearly as long. Sti...

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