by EroticPenmen
For Loki`s sake! This is by far the best chapter so far!
And considering the quality of the previous ones, this says a lot!!!
A little surprised at myself but I'm enjoying your story. Suggest you get an editor to take out the errors which make it annoying to read, but I'm looking forward to Part 4. Thanks.
I'm working on an update. It's a little slower going, I felt like the last one was rushed. I also need to find an editor, however I'm almost finished with Pt 4.