All Comments on 'Koochee'moya'

Erotic and sexually taboo along with having a good background story. Interesting and a little on the supernatural side which made it a good read.

Thanks for the good read.

One hell of a story, thanks for sharing. Give us more, we'll keep reading.

Max052.

obscure STV references will always get me to read story.Your job is to keep me interested.

Wow. Exactly my kind of story (a little supernatural element 'does it' for me. Go figure). Most enjoyable story I've read in quite a while. I especially liked the build up of the sexual tension. Very well done

very well done !

Bravo !! Fantastic story, Loved the way you set the scene at the first with the Tribe. Sexual build up was spot on. Keep it up... you truly are talented : )

one of the best I've ever read, love whole family stuff like this.

thanks.

An intriguing twist I would think that this is a combination of incest/unhuman, really an excellent combination.

Boy, I can't tell you how much reading this story brightened up my day. Such a wonderful tale. The Native American back story with its supernatural elements makes for a brilliant framework to hang the story on. Plus, your writing skills are excellent. The narrative flows smoothly and with none of the usual grammatical or punctuation errors that seem to be a hallmark of most Literotica stories. Again, I loved this story and the ending was the cherry on the top of a delightful confection. One can't help wondering what happened next, but please don't write a sequel. That would just spoil it. I want to imagine what happens next in my mind and my mind alone

Why not just a real close family.

Good work.

Shaman, wigwams, squaws. Was this author born in the 1800's because that's when they used those names to describe the indigenous peoples of North America. Native tribes didn't have Shamans, wigwams and squaws were names that white people made up. I couldn't read past that b.s.

Well done

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