- Incest/Taboo
- Koochee'moya
- Page 4
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Now, it didn't matter that the new tribe were the ancestors of those that murdered the first beloved, it was what the fates had delivered and the tree would see to the rest. The water they bathed, washed their dishes in, drank and prepared their food with, the very same water that fed the tree would continue to enrich them as it had been, but more so. The fish they would catch from the brook would nourish them well, overcoming genetic irregularities that could easily show up in a young, small tribe. Their vegetable patch, already having yielded in abundance and health for the last two years, would be greater yet, as would be their health and the health of all their perfect, noble offspring for eating from it. Koochee'moya would benefit from his wisdom and eternal patience and be honoured, yet once again.
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- COMMENTS
alan_deeabout 1 year agoShaman, wigwams, squaws. Was this author born in the 1800's because that's when they used those names to describe the indigenous peoples of North America. Native tribes didn't have Shamans, wigwams and squaws were names that white people made up. I couldn't read past that b.s.
AlphaRalphaover 4 years agoBoy, I can't tell you how much reading this story brightened up my day. Such a wonderful tale. The Native American back story with its supernatural elements makes for a brilliant framework to hang the story on. Plus, your writing skills are excellent. The narrative flows smoothly and with none of the usual grammatical or punctuation errors that seem to be a hallmark of most Literotica stories. Again, I loved this story and the ending was the cherry on the top of a delightful confection. One can't help wondering what happened next, but please don't write a sequel. That would just spoil it. I want to imagine what happens next in my mind and my mind alone
TruGentMuldunalmost 12 years agoAn intriguing twist I would think that this is a combination of incest/unhuman, really an excellent combination.
