All Comments on 'Kortzan Enterprises Ch. 01'

The story has the potential to become a classic among classics, of all your stories this is the one that deserves more of your time. It will be pity if you don't keep it going.

Lot's of very intriguing places for this to go. I hope you are able to patiently develop it and finish it appropriately. Some great stories like "Give of the Graduates" or "The Student" collapse in a rushed and lazy ending. This one has a potential to be one of the best stories on the site. Anyone who doesn't rate this 5 stars is quite closed minded and ignorant. I wish you well and will be checking back frequently for new chapters. Jahoo