by Arlibis
Meh, interesting creature but if I wanted to read a polemic against a religion I would read Richard Dawkins. It distracted too much from the plot.
This is an important part of the plot that makes the hero who he is. I understand you perfectly, but the original idea was to show the tentacles alive and intelligent. And without a backstory, a character has no character.
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This is an important part of the plot that makes the hero who he is. I understand you perfectly, but the original idea was to show the tentacles alive and intelligent. And without a backstory, a character has no character.
Thank you for your feedback.
I adore this story. I keep coming back to it. I wish there were more like this.