All Comments on 'Kristen gives Dave a birthday show!'

Yes, I would enjoy the view as I walked along the sidewalk by the beach...!!!

Amazing story, well written. This has been a fantasy of mine since the wife and I married but no way in **** would she ever do something like that. Thanks for putting a vision to my fantasy.

Realistic sex fantasy, really could have happened. No boring fxxxxxg descriptions.

Since first reading your story a few days ago, I've been a little obsessed with it. It's honestly one of the hottest things I've ever read. Amazing job!

I really loved this story. Simply tossing away her clothes one at a time was the perfect twist. Glad I found this story. Rockport, TX better watch out for our own reenactment.

Wow! The literary version of 'less is more'. VERY well written. I do hope the story continues, don't worry, you ARE up to it. If I don't find part two, I'll read another of yours.