All Comments on 'Kylarena Ch. 01'

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Axelotl about 11 years ago

5 stars

Great writing mate, just the right amount of detail. The way she was wavering between being willing and unwilling was fuckin hot. Looking forward to further chapters.

penthesword about 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks!

Glad you liked it Axelotl. Not entirely sure where I'm going to go with it next, but I have a few ideas.

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

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