All Comments on 'Kyle and Nicole Get Caught'

yes, i can't wait until Mr. Reed gets home! chapter 2 now please!!!!

Interesting setting but a great story cant wait for chapter 2.

Make sure Nicole gets hers and please check your story for errors. Sorry but I am a stickler for that stuff.

why would he put up with the bitch when his mother asked if wanted his girlfriends mother to teach him a lesson he should have said SHE IS TO OLD AND UGLY, then walk out the door after slapping both mothers.

IF he was smart when his girlfriends mother offered to teach him he should have asked his girlfriend for her fathers phone number and when the mother asked why he wanted it he would say I FIGURED HE MIGHT WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU DO WITH YOUR DAUGHTERS BOYFRIENDS WHEN HE'S NOT HOME. with writing like this you need to learn two things 1) welcome to walmart can i get you a carriage and 2) do you want fries with that. you will never be more than a hack at writing.

You know those stories that make you want to chuck your tablet/e-reader across the room because the tale pissed you off so much? Yeah, this is one. But, hey, there's plenty of people who get off on teenagers being semi-raped and humiliated. Not me, though...if there were a sequel, it'd be dad molesting his trauma

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Traumatized teenage daughter. This really pissed me off.