All Comments on 'Kyle & Sarah Ch 02'

Keep up the great stories. I'm not a writer, but I am a reader and I had excellent visual imagery of what the writer was trying to convey.

You need to read the first chapter, to see what is developing. Sensual, sadistic, intense. But I'm beginning to feel sorry for Kyle.

god, why can't i find someone to take me like that

that was absolutly fucktastic

what to say really. Kyle is an incredible dom in this story but not is his lifetime. Doing many women the way he does Sarah shows his quickness to boredom with any one woman and thus his lack of true self control. He can control the situation for a period of time but not long enough to keep a slave for years at a time. If he could carry this type of domination over a single or even a group of women for many years he would be a Master indeed but he bores too easily and so he's just a regular manipulator off the street. Excellent writing and a very stimulating story....you're my favorite writer so far.