All Comments on 'Kylie'

by TxRad

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BuzzCzarBuzzCzaralmost 3 years ago

I'm going ahead and apologize because I'm going to complain about the story length and it usually pisses me off to have someone else complain about it. The story posted is complete in that it has a beginning, a middle, and an end. However, with your storytelling skill there are so many ways it could go on from where you left it. That could be a very interesting clan/tribe/group to learn about. Think about it?

stewartbstewartbalmost 3 years ago

A good beginning for a long trip.

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 3 years ago

Nice satisfying quickie! Thank you, Tx! 😃

Cheers

SAGE

Omart57Omart57almost 3 years ago

The best! Loved it , Rad!

subnotslavesubnotslavealmost 3 years ago

A soft, loving and charming story!

Thank you

5* Jules

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfirealmost 3 years ago

Lovely story with an excellent message. Great job, 5*

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75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...