by TxRad
I'm going ahead and apologize because I'm going to complain about the story length and it usually pisses me off to have someone else complain about it. The story posted is complete in that it has a beginning, a middle, and an end. However, with your storytelling skill there are so many ways it could go on from where you left it. That could be a very interesting clan/tribe/group to learn about. Think about it?