All Comments on 'Kyra and the Swordstress Pt. 03'

I've been a fan of high fantasy / sword and sorcery as long as I can remember and this is shaping up to be as good as anything I've read in the professional world. I'm glad you've resolved to see this through, Jackie---unfortunately there have been too many first-rate stories on Lit where the authors have disappeared leaving the tales unfinished. Looking forward to seeing how our trio handle their rescue mission.

Yep, more please! ;)

I will read this story 10 times if that is what it takes. I still miss Xena WP so if this version of Xena, Gabrielle and Joxer is the best we can do, so be it. And how foolish of us to be scornful of an aether bond?

Good story so far. Please keep writing and I'll keep reading!

@Maonaigh, thanks! I have the ending already written so I'm committed to finishing the story!

@metroalma, omg I totally did not see the parallel with xena warrior princess, but I was obsessed with that show growing up! Totally going to lean into that now.

Jackie, this is improving with the telling. Looking forward to the next!

First its another 5 star worthy tale and You with your magic, jackie, having hooked me ….. so yes please continue and let us, your dear readers, enjoy this next’s chapters ….. yes an aether bond or may i call it soulmate, is exceptional is extraordinary is worth fighting for ….. so hopefully the three will find a way, to beat some serious sense into Belladonna the great sorcerer 🧙‍♀️

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This is an absolutely amazing and captivating tale. The best part is that the story itself takes centre stage with the sex being a lovely dose of spice. Please continue with it as I will definitely be waiting with bated breath.

Thank you for penning such a great story.

Absolutely loving this story and looking forward to its conclusion!

You caught me.

Destiny ? Coincidence ?

Who knows.

The gods are never talking about that even if they know.

On to the next chapter in this tail by a pussy.

Great story, well told, I’m in.

still good be well happy and safe a fan shayne