All Comments on 'Kyra and the Swordstress Pt. 05'

I can't add much more than I've said previously, Jackie. This series continues well and is probably the best fantasy series I've read on this site. It's worthy of many of the Golden Age fantasy writers such as Robert E Howard and others. I can see this story getting even better---my sole criticism is that it's easy for the reader to lose track when there is a long gap between parts. One small point: water is collected in "pails", not "pales". A writer as good as you are should beware these kind of errors---don't rely too much on spell-checkers; if you use a wrong word but it is spelled correctly, the spell-checker will not pick up the error.

A marvellous story, thoroughly enjoyable. It pretty much brightens my day every time I see that a new chapter has been published. Great stuff.

Nice story building . Eager to read the next installement

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Another beautiful story from a wonderful writer but in a competition / catagory i wouldn't normally read.

Eager for the next installment...

Jackie, this dream/flashback was fantastic!

You don’t have to hide your tales behind books of so called bestselling authors, you are writing in the same league …… im stunned and heart is pounding as im still thinking about scarlets upcoming and training ….. just extraordinary again …… 🗡️ 🗡️🗡️🗡️🗡️🗡️🗡️🗡️🗡️🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💝🌹

Excellent. This chapter flows beautifully, believably, and has me hooked now.

i must work now though i wish to read more im enjoying this a lot be happy well and safe a fan shayne