All Comments on 'La Belle Ile en Mere Pt. 08'

The slight problem with this story finally became acute in this chapter, namely, that while it is important that the guests can't understand French and don't understand Ocean, the reader should be able to understand what the computer is saying. I didn't bother to run it through Google Translate the first few chapters, and it wasn't critical to know for some of them, but it has been building, and Ocean's response and, most especially, reference to "The Reversion", and Kapnos being " the longest guest" seems to be critical to the reader understanding the story. Please add the translations for the reader, even as the players in the tale are unable to understand.

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I agree with the comment by RWesson, below. The French passages should be translated into English for the sake of the readers. Running the computer's statement through Google Translate provided:

"It was not a household robot. He was the oldest guest. I was unaware that this particular guest was still with us until the recent reversion. It seems like I was programmed to..."

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It is of interest that the computer referred to Kapnos in the masculine ("He"). Although it may come out that Kapnos is a member of a non-binary race, that has no fixed gender. Good story, though. Thanks for posting.

Just too weird for me and this should be on Sci Fi pages 3 stars