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Not bad work.

Another excellent work! Thank you!

Great work once again!

Lovely piece. One lingering question I have though, is why did Esca and Lasi make that promise?

I really feel like Snatch has been at one point a student at a Cloistered Monastery to become a Cloister Magus, though he failed. Especially since he reffered to esoteric abilities at one point in the story and even in Sea Slimes we see something based on that.

It would also be funnier if dwarves did in fact exist at some point of time and that Alrek is in fact part dwarf. Though this is a personal opinion.

Lastly I would like to comment that I personally find the stories more enjoyable with recuring characters as protagonists. Though my opinnion doesn't really count as I am unable to aid you through patreon, Patrons always come first.

Another thing is, are there half-elves in the world or since elves are basically (as I understand) half-human half fey the offsrping adopts the race of the parent that is not an elf.

As always thank you for the story, it was quite enjoyable.

As a side note I feel like there is constant improvement in your writting, you have become MUCH better since your first stories here. When I first saw them I wasn't really interested, but I as a very difficult reader have really been drawn into the world you are making (And not only for the smut, in fact the smut is the least).

And the actual last thing: On what you said on tumblr about adding transgender people in your stories I would propose one question. Does it make sense? As in "Is there any magic that would make it possible?" . Unless, of course you are talking about the mind rather than the body. As many (I feel like this is the truth) stories of yours center around adventurers think how common it would be for people to go adventuring. And when you introduce them, please don't make it all about how they are transgender (Like in Mass Effect Andromeda). I would also like to add that it would be prefferable (to me at least) to create new characters if you want repressentation rather than changing older ones. (Please don't pull a Thor.)

As always thank you for your work.

Yeah, it's fairly clear that the stories with recurring characters are my bread-and-butter. And hey, that's fine by me—I'm probably a better storyteller than smut writer.

Regarding half-elves: Good question! I don't think I've confirmed the extent to which elves and humans are "mutually fertile". It doesn't come up often, at least nowadays.

Thank you for the feedback, and for the kind words! I really appreciate the time you put into this comment.

I'd be interested in more stories set in underwater places and with aquatic monster girls.

I always enjoy when you add tickling into your stories ;)

I really like your stories like this one. I hope you make some more soon.

This one wasn't a waste of time.... Amazing

4 stars because the ending felt like main character plot powers, so many thing went right in a row.

It really was like watching an anime where the mc should logically lose, only for a bs powerup sequence.

The power of friendship is so op, you don't even need to monologue or even have friends to activate it.