All Comments on 'Lacie Ch. 04'

OK ,I'M DONE WITH LITEROTICA, this master shit has spread like an infection in all categories, at least they could keep it away from ' romance'.

kate

When I read the first chapter I wasnt quite sure if this was going to be a story I was going to like. But the more I read the more I want to know how lacie is going to act towards the master and where the romance is going to come in. I am looking forward to the chapters to come keep up the good work !

Let me guess, master chose Lasie to breed his baby?

I had to skim read this chapter because it was basically two pages about clothes. I understand that you are really into clothes, and some of your readers may be too, but it would have been nice to have something more non-clothes related for the rest of us to get involved with story wise. But I am glad to know the master isn't going to rape Lacie.

Your a good writer and I'm going to give this story a chance. But you really need to reconsider the category this story belongs In. There is no need for you to get upset when it's obvious that so far there has been very little romance. And I do agree with the comment below that there has been very little plot progression and a little too much about clothes.

-k-