All Comments on 'Lacy's Ironic Twist Ch. 07: Final'

by Wants2benaughty

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Lovely series

I have it in my minds eye now that as there is no story eight she can finally escape.

I know that isn't you aim but that's how I visualise it.

Well done on providing us with some lovely reading.

bodybychocolatebodybychocolateover 9 years ago
Whew, okay now I feel better

I'm realizing he was never 'the bad guy'. Intrigued by what she wrote from the beginning, he pursued her. She put out the call, so to speak, and he responded. They found what each other needed. Kindreds, if you will.

He merely played out what she wrote, which are in fact her fantasies. He added elements to make her submit, obey, and ultimately stay. The kitten. The switching out the birth control pills. Etc.

This story held my interest. And I love the HEA ending.

Thank you, W2BN. Well done.

*good sigh*

Bbc

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
To bodybychocolate

Of course, let your imagination run wild. Maybe she was telling him what he wanted to hear to get him off guard.

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyover 9 years agoAuthor
To Masterfuljim

Thank you. That was the intent :)

bodybychocolatebodybychocolateover 9 years ago
Meh

Is that shade I'm getting? Lol Oh well ;)

So the Ironic Twist?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I cried at the end.

I saw it coming... but that didn't make it any less emotional. Thanks for the feels.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where was the twist?

Must have missed it. Along with the good parts.

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