All Comments on 'Ladies' Night'

Growing anticipation with each paragraph was fantastic. A very explosive (pun intended), and suspenseful story. Thanks

Wow...

That is all I can say

oh her way home cum still running from her stretched and swollen gash she begins to come out of her drunken stupor and begins to feel what will be bruises on her tits. She was taken, fucked, used as a piece of meat in public with people she knew watching her degrade herself and totally betray her husband and her marriage. She has been marked, is now known as an adulterous cheater with no morals nor character. She wonders if she has become infected by a man who cared nothing for her any more than a piece of meat he would eat then after a few days shit away. She knows now she is wasted trash she can never let the man she loves have again. Tears flow heavily from her eyes as she shoves the gas pedal down. Not thinking now, not really seeing she accelerates faster and faster, the the supported columns from the over past come into view and she turns the high speed vehicle directly at one column and releases her seat belt. Muttering forgive me my husband, for give me god, there is a violent impact and instant death. The accident report reads DWI one vehicle fatal accident, and she is buried as a loving wife and a beloved daughter, her loved ones not knowing what a wasted worthless piece of meat she was.

It's too much like rape.

Crescendo climbing at its best. Thanks for posting.

are you writing about little kids having the first ice cream or adults ? if the should be adults it's more than sad

Outstanding! Superb descriptions, Bravo!

Fantastic story with fabulous descriptions! Please write more.

This style of story telling is quite unique, at least on this website. It's a nice change and I enjoyed it very much.

What an awesome story! I am so looking forward to more from you

Thought the story was awesome, very different. Well written, loved the descriptions of the passion.

I know. I've tried it many times in my stories. You have succeded. Thank you.

worthless whore.

hope she gets knocked up and gets a disease.

worthless skank is nothing but a cheating whore.

Now her husband should get on down & lick & suck at her well fucked, cum filled tight married snatch - Deeeeeeelicious

Sarah

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

This is one of the most powerful pieces of erotic writing I have ever read.

I never give 5 for cheating wives but this deserves it

JJ

Readers can be thankful that this submission is over 10 years old and the writers only one.

A well written and highly erotic story of how a woman, out with her girlfriends, reluctantly allows her uncontrollable passion to overcome her resistance to the moment and in blind passion gets the fucking of her life in public. It is an event she will never forget (read flashbacks) and never live down.