All Comments on 'Ladies Night'

Love at first sight, does it really happen? Good potential to this story, but I found the dialogue a little awkward, maybe it is just to my elderly male ears. There were a few wrong words in it, maybe proof read before you submit. Keep up the good work.

That was a cute story , I'm hoping you write more on Sam and kat :)

Interesting meet-up, hot hook-up. Agree that it needs a copy edit, but not bad writing.

Accidentally reported your story. It is very good and I enjoyed it very much.

For the positive feedback, this story was actually my first erotica and is several years old thus the lack of focus on it, been meaning to write more on the subject really.

This had me grinding 2 my gf right after!!!

Good story but moved to fast 4star