All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 03'

As in the previous two chapters of this story an editor is badly needed.

Good story, careless writing.

So Bunty is the one Val thinks was having an affair with her husband. The one that she thinks gave her husband, and therefore her, an STD. Not once, but 3 times. And here she is nonchalantly eating her pussy, and getting her ready for her son's cock?

There is more plot in a 70's porno. No story, just people showing up and then fucking. Just like in the first one, where mom shows up, says; "I'm getting a divorce", then shoves her tongue down her son's throat, and offers him all her holes. No build up, no background, no plot.

What's next? A plumber with a fake mustache and a bad accent saying "I am here to give you big pipe!"