All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 26'

by Harddaysknight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Got to say I did not like the very last paragraph

HDK,

This is a wonderful series and I cannot wait for the next installment, but that last paragraph really did bother me. I hold teachers in high regard, but where I live there have been at least a dozen cases of teachers abusing sexually and so I find this part very very bothersome. It doesn't seem to fit with the story as I see it anyway.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 10 years ago
Wow, you do know how to leave us on the edge.

Great story and I can't wait for the next chapter to post. Thanks for your excellent work. Poor old Steve has it so hard.

Smoknjoe24Smoknjoe24over 10 years ago
Ut oh

I wonder if Gwen put Ashley up to that last bit. This could get interesting :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Enjoying the story, but

the story was going ok until the last two paragraphs.

I don't see how that fits or is appropriate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This has been a great story, you write very well. Like the others writing comments I too do not like the way this chapter ended. I have had to much respect for Miss

Summers character to now see her resorting to this kind of behavior. Sleazy sex with a teacher will ad nothing to this story but it will cheapen it greatly. Like everyone that has read this series I can't wait for more.

myassisdraginmyassisdraginover 10 years ago
Great series

I have refrained from commenting on this series until I read all chapters so far and it is one of the best I have read in a while....

HDK you rate right up there among the best writers on this "board"......

Looking forward to the next chapter

Myassisdragin

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
What the hell?

Did not see this coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yeah. Like...

... I'm gonna quit reading and go to sleep now. Unexpected twist. Did not see it coming.

What happens next? Curious minds want to know...

Nice. Thanks!

VisualPerv

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Unusual twist...

WOW!

If the female teachers are like that these days - I'm gonna try to get back in school!!

A skillfully written chapter. I like your work.

AnotherOldMarineVet

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
1*

appalled by all the women talking in public about their husbands or boyfriends not holding a candle to wonder boy. what the hell?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Did not like that last twist

Seemed a little too pervy for the teacher and this story. Please get back on track.

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
what a reversal

it wasn't very long ago a special school board meeting was held to consider expelling the 3 students for bad behaviour and setting improper examples, now the principal is asking them to leave for the good of the school because they are too well liked.

quite a change.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
For a while now....

I've wondered. How is any man or boy close to any of these women not resentful? Shouldn't Paula's advice be. "Shut up about Steve to your boyfriends" If all I heard about was how bitchen Steve is, it would get old real fast. Maybe it would go like this, " If STEVE makes you so wet, then go fuck him and GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME". Hhmmmm, maybe I'm over reacting. Nope, I'm not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
anon 7/28

You are spot on. I don't mind over the top but comeon. I would imagine that ANY other guy would say the same. "If he is so great, go fuck him"

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

More nauseating repetition about have they all love one another.We got the message by Ch five,we don't need constantly reminding.Also how does Steve know Uncle Joe wouldn't go to LA if he didn't ask him.He never invites him to any events despite the fact he took Steve in,he might get a pleasant surprise if he asked him.Also what happened to Mike ,Kate's boyfriend,he just disappeared.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Questions

Questions,why did Tyler need introducing to Amber,she knew who he was from covering the State final?.How come Tyler's dad knew about the problem they had with Sara's date?.Just more flaws.

missouridocmissouridocalmost 4 years ago
More nit picking by the gutless wonder (Anonymous)

Why is it that A guy who is reading every chapter feels the need to nit pick this story? If you don't like the way this author writes, then don't read his story! Your endless critiques of this story are boorish and at times vicious. As for my opinion, yes, there are some things that aren't perfect, but then the author doesn't profess to be a professional writer. I am really enjoying a work of fiction that is really quite well done. If you want to continue to nit pick, at least have the balls to state your name! To me, you project a failed writer, who wants to pick on other people who show their talent. In my mind you a The gutless wonder, and will continue to be so as long as you hide your name. So do everyone who enjoys this story and stop with your whining bullshit. Harddaysnight, thank you for sharing a wonderful story with us! George Dickherber

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
DON'T READ THE COMMENTS! !!

DON'T READ THE COMMENTS! !!

They are poison. Just enjoy the story.

Well, that's just my advice. What do I know, I've only

Read this 5 or 6 times. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Only nitpick I have about this chapter is that Kate is not having the last word in, as she has in previous chapters. Fix this!

Seriously, great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Mort Govern would have been arrested, beaten, and or run out of town and his dealership bankrupted, and or quietly had a hunting accident. To much of what he did was known by to many people. And in a smaller town you just don’t get away with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Steve go for the Teacher . Gwen is forcing his family on him , Steve's Grandmother and Aunt and cousin all like him because he is famous . Steve drop the Dead weight and inform Gwen He Never wants to have anything to do with them . If She keeps pushing it Grab a different lady

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Now that's too much

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

What the hell!!!!

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