All Comments on 'Lady in the Rain'

One of the best reads in along while .Hope you can write a part 2

Not the sexiest story on LIT, but I liked it. One thing, tho....people need to stop using fruit when describing breasts. “Navel oranges just evokes an image of a baseball at the bottom of a tube sock! Use the lettering system.....”perfectly shaped C-cup tits”

Good story.

More please.

This has possibilities.

Maybe slow the pace down?

Loved this story. And the surprise of Peter getting into the wetness of the C.E.O.'s wife. And she owned the company? Nice twist.

***** Stars.

This story line can run for some time, so much to explore. Please add a few more chapters

Great story nice ending

If there is a part two then I think Mr Clark should have to work under Peter

The author gets a high mark from me because:

1. He knows way more about English grammar than the average writer on this site

2. Peter did not have a ten inch cock as thick as his arm

3. Ruth did not have 44DD boobs

4. Although the events are not probable they are at least plausible.

Will somebody please explain to all authors that no body fluid or body part can be warmer than the general body temperature of the person concerned and that the testicles remain passive throughout the procedure (apart from manufacturing semen) and that the pumping/squirting is done by the prostate gland. I'm not really accusing darkoverlord of the latter crime but I seem to recollect that Peter at one stage felt the heat from Ruth's nether region when his face was close to it.

But altogether, Well Done!C

Very entertaining story, Thanks for sharing.

More, please. Great characters. I would love to see some of the peripheral characters re-enter the story. The girlfriend, the dad, etc. If not, then thanks. Sweet story. *****

There should be a Chapter 2, to allow Peter to become Ruth's "trophy husband".

great read thanks

There is definitely subject matter for more chapters and there seems to be other readers with the same opinion. Well thought out and well written.

Thanks for all the positive feedback! It always makes my day when I see something I've written resonate with so many folks.

The good news for those that asked is, although I had originally planned for this story to be a one off, so many people have asked for more that I started writing a second chapter today. It's coming along very nicely, and I expect to have it up next week.

So hang on to see what happens with Peter and Ruth next!

Great, balanced story! Very good work!

Looking forward to more of your writing.

Well done for a story that every reader can relate to in their dreams. Loved it and look forward to reading it again when needing an emotional pick me up.

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you!

Very good. Please keep writing. And thank you.

That was a very romantic and special story. I only wish he would have seen what his dad had to say about his promotion.

Beautiful story! Awesome job!

The company situation was a little odd but otherwise well crafted.

When one is least looking for it! So complete in this story - Well done!

Dearest darkoverlord,

I'm beyond happy. There's another chapter waiting in the wings! Yay!!!!

GG

Two words.

MORE MORE

Ricky

I love your writing Author, but they all seem unfinished...

Unless you were "Old Man Hathaway" lol. Great story and told in an easy to read way. Well done.

This was an excellent story and very well written! Probably one of the top 5 I've read on literotica! I'll be sure to read more of your work.

I have read quite a bit of your work and..... I will be reading quite a bit more!

Loved the Story

I loved this story. You are a great writer. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Again keep up the great work.

Loved the way you crafted the story. This was erotic and not the usual slam bang. Keep writing.

Decent story,would have liked to know what happened next.

Absolutely lovely! More of these two please. Romance and lust are a great combination

Enjoyed the characters and dialog. Somehow the age differences don’t add up. Moreover, the word is palpable not palatable.

Excellent, congratulations to the author.

Lovely story. Quite a difference in ages but you made it work well.

hot!

Every time I reread this that ending lands perfectly.

That was a mistake.

I love a happy ending in more ways than one! Thanks for a great read. However I KNOW this is a fantasy...usually there is a saying that I am familiar with that is more realistic........"IF you marry a rich woman, prepare to work hard for the money"....lol.

😍 5 star story

This is just the kind of story I like to read, in my perusing of the offerings on Literotica. It is sweet, with the dramatic underpinnings of "office drama", and that oh so luscious attraction that happens between a woman and a man when they first meet and know they are meant to be!!

Ruth and Peter are a lovely couple; he is SO GOOD TO HER, encouraging her to be who she really is (and always has been!). I had the 'so strange' feeling that she was going to be someone important, somehow/someway...and when Ruth said she had to be at "some corporate function" with her husband...there it was...the opportunity for both to be surprised.

That Ruth actually OWNS majority stock in the company...THAT IS TOO MUCH...in a good way...and that "Richard" got the boot like that was his own doing...probably deserved sooner than later...🫢🤨...good riddance.

Peter...now, he has a career start, due to an influential sponsor...yet, they are going to make a go of the spark...Part 2, here I come...gotta see how this goes.

Five**5**Stars...for what most certainly is one of my favorite stories...💥💥💥💥💥💯⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡

Heck yeah I like it, it's a five to me but maybe not something that could happen to us mokes down on the bottom.

Nice story

Fooled the shit outta me!!!! Thought I was reading an erotic story that pfffft, became chick story. Ya know, Overlord? I fully expected a submission of Science Fiction with ‘Ruth’ actually being a Greek Goddess in an escape to ravage some nerdy dude. Well, I’m somewhat by of s nerdy dude… old…40 years of Software Engineering, but nothing like this. Outstanding, my friend , 5*