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by ABigCat

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SirKevinSirKevinalmost 2 years ago

Author, I enjoyed it.

Good dialogue is very difficult, and I love that you used French as shorthand to show who was talking. Nicely done! I also like the descriptive prose telling what was happening physically as well as within the protagonist's mind.

My only critique is a personal perspective: compersion is infinitely healthier and more satisfying than jealousy. I hope the protagonist learns to love herself better, without having to control another person/people.

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Lady Lovecome's Diary is now finished. I'll wrap it up as a series at some point but for now to read it in order do "Lady Lovecome's Diaries:" 01 thru 05 then, if you prefer a happy ending, finish on "Tending Lady Lovecome's Garden." Enjoy! BC