All Comments on 'Lady on a Train'

Very pleasant story. Only in New York.

However, you write too well for you to make grammatical mistakes. Usually possessives.

no details in the fucking part crap

For sharing.

Many authors, and some illiterate commentators, aren't happy without multiple pages detailing the sex act. Others can appreciate quality writing that doesn't need to do this. Well done.

This was a lovely romance story the negative comment you made makes it appear you are at the age when a child first discovers their penis is for more than going to the toilet. Are you sure you are old enough to be on a site for grown ups?

It was like Bolero. Slow, steady build-up with a solid, but not outrageous ending. Or was it just a new beginning. This was well crafted and I was amazed that it was only one page long. Some skilled people only need a page or two to do what others need 4 or 5 pages. 5* and a thank you.

You’re lucky he rated you years ago. He’s a lot nastier now, both with scoring and with his remarks.

I thought I had read all the Felicity stories, but I had missed this one. Nice to find it