All Comments on 'Lady Smith Lock and Key Pt. 04'

Fine story, better characters, and the usual minor spelling distractions.

Thanks.

Love this story. Thank you.

Good dialogue, better characterizations. 5*

Good story!

5

I have enjoyed the rough characteristics of Lady! The chapters have been a fun read. As you mentioned, it's been a while since your last post. I found it a little difficult to try and sort out the characters in the beginning; trying to recall who, what, why etc as you seemed to spontaneously pick up from the previous chapter. I would suggest that you might add a brief intro to the story. Just a catch up paragraph; a synopsis of prior events as a refresh for readers, before you launch into the storyline. It would help this foggy mind to recall the events from a couple of months ago.

Thank you for this continued storyline. It is a refreshing, raw style of delivery.

So did the Caesar kill her father then?

Outstanding characters and action

Is becoming my favorite prostitute, great character. In a story full of great characters. She is too smart it seems, to make so many bad decisions, curious what she has planned for this security gig.

The problem with all her smartness is that she is so INCREDIBLY STUPID not to use her connections to take down the gang or at least escape them. Fun story, though.