All Comments on 'Lady Smith Lock and Key Pt. 08'

Has my adrenaline pumping! Like a ball of string that a cat just ran across. This story is so convoluted. I'm reading and trying to recall who was who and what was on which base in the previous episodes. Still damn nice work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

You know how to tantalize us, don't you? Leave us dangling, waiting to learn what happens...

Really glad you found the time. You're a look-forward-to. Thank you!

Great to see this update.

Still exciting! I hope Lady isn't killed.

5

Just read the entire series again. Probably will again if you don’t post the next one soon. Excellent stuff.

Thamks for the new chapter CF. Hope that another chapter doesn't take 3 months. In all seriousness, hope that you and yours have been safe in these crazy times. As always, waiting for your next installment.

Now the reveal (but first…). So great, can’t wait.

Great story.

I have now read everything you have. I have no complaints. Other than a few editor issues that were missed, but they were minor. If you're interested in a second pass at editor, is be willing to make those reads.

Looking forward to more.

Have you considered submitting for publication? I think you could make a living of of your writing.

It’s a great story. I’ve missed reading these episodes, glad you’re writing again.

Miles was crooked, but dead? Nobody wants to acknowledge the possibility. Now, Alice/Dinah… seems like Lady’s most likely lifeline.

Gotta agree with Master_Jones. You should consider self publishing in ebook form. This is the second time I've given that advice on this forum. First time was to Eliot Kay. He took down "Good Intentions" off this site when he went pro.

I just read all eight. They just keep getting better and better. Bring on #9!

Absolutely outstanding! Another 5 stars.

There was another typo too but it made me laugh so much, just the mental imagery of Kirkpatrick throwing a Badger ( 🦡 ) at her boss….

Tess (uk)

At last! Alice resurfaces.When all else fails release the sociopath.