All Comments on 'Lady Smith Lock and Key Pt. 10'

Great chapter!

5

Excellent story. Thank you.

Excellent. Now I’m wondering which characters, other than the sniper, will appear in more stories. Looking forward to that. Thanks for sharing your outstanding writing.

Outstanding!

A very compelling read. Thanks for sharing your imagination and time.

Tess (uk) 5⭐️

You have wrapped up a lot of loose ends in this one. It seems a bit anticlimatic throughout most of it. Still nicely done. Now on to the unfinished business at hand...

At the risk of repeating myself, again, this is a fun ride. 5*

This just keeps getting better, and better, and better.

Your writing style is spare, so I often have to think and pull in the details so I know what's going on. That just adds to the enjoyment of the story. If I have to think and recall, I get so much more enjoyment from the reading. You, and one other writer on the site, are the only people who can do that and I enjoy your work more than any other writer here.

Please keep at it and I'll keep hanging out for your monthly posts. The Order Of The Shattered Cross will be amazing. I already know that before it is done.

Excellent story. Great storyline without burying it in gratuitous sex. Guess I need to read your other works now. Probably will enjoy that.

Not sure why. I've read and enjoyed everything you've allowed us to read here. All 5's. I started and stopped this one several times. I guess I didn't like Lady in the beginning. Really good, thank you for the gift. Glad I finished it.

Good Lord what a ride! Outstanding and woven storyline! Thank you ! I always look forward to your offerings! I think that’s the best action adventure story I have read on this site!

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