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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

IT WAS FINE....READY TO GIVE IT A HIGHER RATING....UNTIL THE VERY END, WHEN THE BOSS TURNS OUT TO BE MS. MANIPULATOR. THUD. I GAVE IT 3* BECAUSE IT WAS WELL-WRITTEN, BUT WITHOUT THE BETTING AND THE MANIPULATION IT WOULD HAVE BEEN HIGHER.

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Writing stories where the whims of my interest carry me. I've not been active for a while but I have not been idle! Have a banger of a story coming out soon and obviously some more private lesson shorts. Will probably try to work on more short form stories after this one for a...