All Comments on 'Lake of Forbidden Desire'

I hope you continue writing this story, I enjoyed reading it. It is a great beginning.

That was a great story, great build up from start to finish...

the chemistry between the reluctant sister and the willng-to-drill-any-hole brother was so masterfully handled. I need to stress that i leave 1 comment out of 100 stories i read. So this is one hell of a story!

thanks for the great time!

regards.

A great story and I wish that you would continue on with Bobby satisfying both his sister and his mom. They need to have the love that they deserve. I have to comment on how well the story was written and how it was so easy to keep my interest in. Fast moving and erotic and the story flowed smoothly. Well done and thanks for the good post.....Rich

How good is this story? A young get to fulfill all mens& boys fantasies...of fucking BOTH his mother AND his sister......

Loved it keep it going and add to it!

....when mom gets back from her shower? Does she join in to make a threesome or does she wait and have her son alone? Please continue the story, even after they get home.

....when mom gets back from her shower? Does she join in to make a threesome or does she wait and have her son alone? Please continue the story, even after they get home.

A very good story.I like how you kept the sex in the story but didn't glorify the cock size etc. even though it was told from a guy's perspective.Also,by adding the every day facts of their respective relationships and injecting humor,you made this tale more realistic and very easy to keep reading.Keep writing this way.You've become the newest addition to my faves list!

I enjoyed the story very much, even if it was a little too easy for the narrator to get what he wanted. But what the heck, fantasies are fun also. I noticed that you do not write any continued stories and I think this one deserves at least three more parts or forty, whichever you prefer. Thanks fo rthe story and the massage tips.

A well written story that was enjoyable to read. I normally hate incest stories but this was fun to read.

... and ended better! A great story with a touch of humour, well done!

Boy this kid sure got lucky for a 19 year old. A stressed out sister and a very horny mother what more could a teenager ask for. Keep writing I liked this one. THX

This was well written and believable (well, perhaps not the ending) and sexy as hell. Loved it!

i, bet this story was wrote by a child!

'How about 'written' dumb nuts... and the child, if it was a child, was probably yours'.. One's fantasy is ones' story and I enjoyed it enough to respond to your dribbling comment... Go get a fuckin life Mr. Wanna Be A Critic....

Humorous, but sexy too? How did you do that?

That is the first time that I have enjoyed mother/son incest. So realistic and believable. I'd love to read a sequel to this. Good work!

Ever thought of euthanasia ?? "1*" !

That's three incest stories now (along this one's vein) that I've read long ago, and considered one of the classic all-time greats.

Bravo! Thanks for sharing it!

I'm always surprised by folks who read these stories and seem to be surprised and offended when a story in the "Incest" queue has, well, incest. I enjoyed reading your work. Very well done! :--)

Thanks a lot. I really enjoyed this, but wished it wouldn't stop so early. It could make me come. Especially the chapter with Bobby and his mum was sweet.

Loved the story and build up , continue it please

The first incest story I liked. You have a sense of humor

This is a great story! Please continue writing like this. It was actually very believable & damned HOT! Sorry, but just," Your hot, No your hot, lets fuck" stories are boring & stupid!

It could happen, YA!! but only if your lucky. nice read thanks

A great and believable story; wish you were still writing! The story line was believable enough. Mom found her self in a situation that couldn't be ignored and worked it out to both their advantages. A great read that will end up in my favorites to read again, thank you for work.

Super creepy, awkward male character. Felt very off.

Very good read.

This one is believable. A touch humor helped it feel real. How it will work out in the long run is anybody guess. Somebody please create another chapter.