All Comments on 'Lake Rat Floozy'

Another very well done - as you already know scoring is influenced by arousal factors as well as talent - this one was tinged by your visualization of a women breeding god knows what fungus's and rot. Couldn't get by that mental image dear author - tried but couldn't help but wonder how your character could?

Still, very well written!!!

example:

bear swilling overweight women <<

must be tough women!

Ignore the bee-otches who are afraid of what their wives do when they're at work. Keep writing.

*****That was Hot and Nasty!! Damn that was a HOT read. Thanks for sharing.