All Comments on 'Lake Temptation'

When did they drink the cabernet he opened? They apparently drained the white wine before moving to a chianti. Is the cabernet sitting open somewhere?

Hell of a story, I liked it. In a way I wanted to see Stephanie and Andrew make a go of it and stay together though. Oh well good story.

well written story of a true love

This is simply a well told story.romantic and brings out a true love relationship.well done

Society makes too many rules for people in love. Too bad they were blinded by dumb rules and could not stay together.

PS Send me those recipes! :-)

I loved the way this was written. It was just the right mix of romance and sex. Reading it it felt like a true story - none of the cliches of 9 inch penises or 42DD breasts.

I'm also glad it had a conclusion. So many authors feel a need to write chapter after chapter instead of being brave and moving on to a new story.

Fantastic piece of writing and I look forward to reading more from you, Eosphorus.

Very well done indeed and thank you.

Its was love and sexy there good Job !!

Well written story... Romatic and erotic.

Relationships of mature siblings are more common than most think.. It can help people get over a difficult time or can be lasting. People should go with their feelings

You are a very passionate writer. This was moving story and I love it.

you started good but ruined it with them marrying others seems to strange and over the top. this also could have used a good editor you had some wrong words and missing words find an editor and ALWAYS use them from now on and think about a rewrite for this one.

I like you story very much and give it 5 Stars.

I agree 100% with the comment left by Col66. This was a nearly perfect story from start to finish. I, too, gave it a 5-star rating. Well done!

MY ONLY PROBLEM WITH THIS STORY, IT ENDED TO SOON. HOW DID THEY MEET THERE NEW LOVES, FUNNY HOW SHE FOUND AND MARRIED,ONLY ONE YEAR LATER. AND TO BOTH FIND PERFECT MATES, WHO WERE OK WITH THERE INCEST, AND LET THEM KEEP GOING. EVEN AFTER THEY MARRIED .GOOD STORY, KEEP IT GOING.BUT EXPLAIN A LITTLE MORE. A FAN MORE MORE MORE

I liked the story, please don't get me wrong. I just wish it would have lingered a bit more.

Very sexy and romantic at the same time. I love that the characters and situations seemed so "real" without all the exaggerated perfection some of these stories tend to have. Great job, can't wait to read more from you!

Thanks to everyone for your comments, votes, and feedback. They are really appreciated.

A gentle tale that exudes an erotic level of spiciness. Spelling and grammar 10/10

Look forward to more.

I wish they'd stayed together. "Made for each other" is different from "Let's fuck." Well-written as always. I'm sure you teach somewhere.

She should has got one in the oven from him

once they crossed the line it would have been to hard to see them with anyone else and would have driven them apart. just proves there is no love between them and no love between them and their spouses either. this isn't the twilight zone keep it believable.

as pointed out; the love that they shared was real, it wasn't anything like "Fuck Buddy". Soul Mates stay together forever; with the cabin and money, no one ever would've caught on enough to care. Everywhere they traveled their IDs had the same last name and they didn't look anything alike. I think that someone took the easy way out.

Also; I prefer 6+ pages, even read a few with 40+ and they're the best. This storyline could've carried it. ... DKP

It's excellent. Mainly the acceptance of the relations by others casually. Good read and to digest ...

Good story, bad ending.

I don't like the ending though. Why couldn't they have moved to Europe together? After his son had turned eighteen, he no longer had any legal obligations toward him, so the half-siblings could continue their exclusive relationship.

Four stars

A somewhat compelling story, like all fantasies, not particularly plausible, but enjoyable to explore. An easy, compact read!!!

I enjoyed it, but would have liked it better if they stayed as a couple. It sort of ruined it for me. I love reading these for more than just the sex. I like stories that have a story. You are good, but I enjoy the live happily together stories more than the found others.

liked the story as a whole.

but the ending was disappointing.

I liked the story but sorta wish they'd stayed together although it didn't ruin the story for me

You certainly packed a lot of story into 2 Literotica pages! I liked pretty much everything about it.

i have read a few of your stories and while all have their good points, in my opinion you do best in the incest genre keep writing

Great story, they stay together also. Too many stories end in a mystery. I like that they stay continue to be together, but it seems a little to unrealistic.

Good writing

A truly lovely story that is both well written and erotic. You show real skill here.

Good.

The ending part made the whole story more believable - except, perhaps, the last sentence ...

I LIKED YOUR STORY...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Another with very good writing, but its highlight the relationship you made between the two, and how wonderful you described the development of deep love between the two, which made their sexuality beautifully possible. JEF

ruined by the poly bullshit at the end. Pity, it was going very well up to right near the end.

The last line ruined the d tire story

3 stars

Good story.

As usual.

Your USP is keeping your story line simple and to the point.

You never deviate.

Your love built ups are excellent.

That too between siblings!

One can't ask for anything more.

There can't be a better bonding than a brother and sister...

Because they grow together, talk-laugh-cry and share everything!

Their love got to be slow yet intense.

I loved your story and built up.

5***** was just a formality.

I liked the story clear up to where they both found new lovers. If they were so perfect for one another why did they go off looking for new partners. That don't make any sense to this cowboy. I envisioned them moving into the cabin and living a life of leisure. I guess the author didn't want to have to deal with the trials of her having his babies. MM

last line totally ruined it. It was bad enough they didn't find a way to stay together, but to make a mockery of their distinct marriages. Wow.. Just a horrible decision.