All Comments on 'Lara's Favor'

All your readers will be looking forward to your future posts.

Thank you for a story that is both sensitive and well written. I hope your real life experience is or the same high quality as your story.

jim

A fine start, please continue their discoveries.

I Liked your story very much - well written! Please continue to write!

Nonsensical crap

oh I love the beautiful girl with the average guy! its more realistic and besides average guys make the best lovers! they worship a beautiful girl's body like she is a goddess! :D

It's only the beginning, I liked this story, I think you should keep writing, and try to write more of these, but also with more meaning or passion, something that messes with the audiences emotions too, I also liked how this story is relatable to most average guys, keep on writing and think BIGger;)

Great , loved your story.could there be a second. Chapter.Please.☺

Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

I hope there's a sequel to this. Your build-up to the climax, pardon the pun, was perfect.