All Comments on 'Laser Tag Love'

by PeytonMirabelle

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youjizz123youjizz1235 months ago

Brief but sweet

LitCritLitCrit5 months ago

Sooo... You don't need a laser to get tagged? Cute story, well written. A quick 5 stars.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

What a pair of sisters!

5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story! Also enjoyed the AA references.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClass4 months ago

Looks like Mia will be marking Fridays on her calendar as "laser tag night." Thoroughly enjoyed it.

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